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In my defiance of our disgusting existence/
I ponder the only thing we've ever accepted/
The concept of life and its undying persistence/
Never denied and never rejected/
I've always believed it was all an illusion/
Given to keep us all in the dark/
Given to keep us from drawing conclusions/
About why our existence leaves no mark/
And while the truth is unfolding in front of our eyes/
Only a few of us come to realize/
That dark, brooding figure, black in disguise/
That pathetic portrait of our meager demise/
Then we return to the nothing/
Where we've been all along/
When we can finally stop bluffing/
There's nowhere we belong//
:iconbrightest-nightmares:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for one reason or another...it was a long time ago. I don't exactly remember.

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:iconredundant-glory:
That's a beautiful piece of writing. I really, really like it. I love the last stanza.
:iconicewolf67:
awesome poem, i like it alot, but only one thing is theres an error in line eight "aoubt" but other then that A+

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~Ice Wolf~Even when death takes my last breath, I'll find a way to still take yours!~
:iconbrightest-nightmares:
Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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I can't wait until the future, when I can take my bullshit in pill form...

- The Not-so-secret Alaskan Pirate
:iconbrightest-nightmares:
Yeah, I edited it, but, for some reason, it doesn't seem to appear when some people view it.

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I can't wait until the future, when I can take my bullshit in pill form...

- The Not-so-secret Alaskan Pirate
:icontheleprechaunbandit:
I like it. The image is cool too.

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Do you know what the queers are doing to the soil?
:iconbrightest-nightmares:
Yeah, that's me staring at you. I see all...

I'm so cheesy :no:

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I can't wait until the future, when I can take my bullshit in pill form...

- The Not-so-secret Alaskan Pirate
:iconspaceentertainer:
i suppose i don't understand, i like it none the less, at least some.

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i was once a very sad boy named happy
:icontheleprechaunbandit:
lol
Dont worry- ive seen cheesier. trust me.
:)

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Do you know what the queers are doing to the soil?
:icondial666:
Very nice, I liked it, and I don't like most peoples poems. =p

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